ClassCJackson/GuilinHomework

EnglishWiki | ClassCJackson | RecentChanges | Preferences | TT | UU | LookUp:
:
:


Difference (from prior major revision) (no other diffs)

Changed: 3c3
Last week we had a trip in Guilin and it was a beautiful place . I like it very much ! People in Guilin were very friendly .
Last week we had a trip in Guilin and it was a beautiful place. I like it very much! People in Guilin were very friendly.

Changed: 5c5
There were many people in Guilin who came from different countries . The first day I came to Yangshuo , I saw a old man near the Li River . The old man with long and white beard in both whose shoulders had two big cormorants . It made people with a different feeling for the Guilin's sceneries . At this time , I saw a foreigner talking with him . Originally , the old man asked the foreigner to give him money beacause of he had a photo with him . But the foreigner didn't konw he must give him money after taking a photo . The foreigner with blue eyes which looked very nice and I guessed him should come from France .
There were many people in Guilin who came from different countries. The first day I came to Yangshuo, I saw a old man near the Li River. The old man with long and white beard in both whose shoulders had two big cormorants. It made people with a different feeling for the Guilin's sceneries. At this time, I saw a foreigner talking with him. Originally, the old man asked the foreigner to give him money beacause of he had a photo with him. But the foreigner didn't konw he must give him money after taking a photo. The foreigner with blue eyes which looked very nice and I guessed him should come from France.

Changed: 9c9,11
This time I went to Guilin , the activity I like most was we riding bikes to the moon-mountain and I thougt it was very interesting .
This time I went to Guilin, the activity I like most was we riding bikes to the moon-mountain and I thougt it was very interesting. There also had a lot of other interesting things, for example, talking with foreigners who came from other counties, found some beautiful veiws, and went to the West-Street. I though it were also very interesting.

If I have another chance to go to Guilin, I will go there with my parents. I think it will have different feelings with them, and I will have a good time with them and I will very happy.

One:

Last week we had a trip in Guilin and it was a beautiful place. I like it very much! People in Guilin were very friendly.

There were many people in Guilin who came from different countries. The first day I came to Yangshuo, I saw a old man near the Li River. The old man with long and white beard in both whose shoulders had two big cormorants. It made people with a different feeling for the Guilin's sceneries. At this time, I saw a foreigner talking with him. Originally, the old man asked the foreigner to give him money beacause of he had a photo with him. But the foreigner didn't konw he must give him money after taking a photo. The foreigner with blue eyes which looked very nice and I guessed him should come from France.

Two:

This time I went to Guilin, the activity I like most was we riding bikes to the moon-mountain and I thougt it was very interesting. There also had a lot of other interesting things, for example, talking with foreigners who came from other counties, found some beautiful veiws, and went to the West-Street. I though it were also very interesting.

If I have another chance to go to Guilin, I will go there with my parents. I think it will have different feelings with them, and I will have a good time with them and I will very happy.


EnglishWiki | ClassCJackson | RecentChanges | Preferences | TT | UU | LookUp:
:
:

This page is read-only | View other revisions
Last edited June 9, 2004 8:03 am by ClassCJackson (diff)
EnglishWiki Search: